Planning - Pitch for Coming

Main Task Pitch

Coming

Genre: Action thriller

Location: My house (Berengrave lane)

Time: Mid day

Characters:

Father -Elijah Potter

Mother - unspecified

Daughter - Elijah's sister

Two murderers - Zachary Jakubowski + Barney Flood

Plot:
Elijah has a bracelet to give to his daughter who has just turned 6 and she is taken from him and his wife before he can give her the bracelet, she was murdered by two men who haven't been caught. going to visit his daughters grave Elijah goes to put the bracelet on her tombstone but catches a glimpse of a poster on a street lamp of the two murderers and his emotions get the better of him so he walks to his car with his wife pulling him back, starts the car with the bracelet on his wrist and says to the camera before accelerating "coming"

Key camera angles and techniques used:

•          Slow zoom for the beginning when Elijah is reaching in to hand his daughter the                        bracelet but she fades to a ghost because she was killed.
•          Tracking shot for when Elijah is walking to his car in anger.
•          Close up for the emotion that is shown.
•          Eye level shot for the end when Elijah says "coming".
•          Two shot for when he is grieving with his wife.
•          Shot reverse shot to him with his wife and his daughter.
•          Match on action when he starts the car.

           Mise en scene:

•        Car
•        Bracelet
•        Tombstone
•        Poster of murderers

Music:

Tense, gripping, copyright free music is ideal for the films genre but at the moment it is unspecified.

target audience:

• 12+
• Anyone looking for a good thrill from an action film
  
  Group Roles

Zak Jakubowski - This pitch was my vision so I typed all of apart from the music, target audience and Mise en scene. I also delivered all of the pitch to the class; explaining why I used certain characters, camera angles, location etc. Yet I still had question arise at the end which is good because even one question from the audience could highlight a hole in the storyline and make the opening a lot better. I answered these questions with Barney and Elijah.

Elijah Potter -  I did the target audience, researching on similar topics to gain the ideal target audience. I also made ideas for particular mise en scene, including costume ideas and props. I also made a suggest for music.

Barney Flood - For this pitch, I didn't present any of the ideas to the class, but I helped answer some questions the class had at the end.